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Sounds good, unfortunately most people on Newgrounds don't speak French. And I speak very little French. Possibly if there could be subtitles.

Tres bien! J'aime il.

aziacomics responds:

Ok, I understand. Have learnt much from your comment. My next production will certainly be in the queen's own language.

The animation is weak, as well as some of the voice actors as if they don't take it seriously. Anyways, all in all it is really enjoyable, [beyond a guilty pleasure]

Levionix responds:

Well for the record this is an older animation check out my newest vid to see how much I have improved but thank you for that critique I appreciate it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WxdZ3Ik0Ng4

It is a fanime and it shows, but not in a bad way. Here is somethings you did well:

-You keep colors and art consistant
-The atmosphere is bouncy and fun
-It feels like you have a passion for this story and that is amazing

Here are the things you could work on:
-The lines, it suffers from what I like to call: Ms Paint syndrome. (Lines that are pixelated and crude)
-The animation is the weakest part since it doesn't have many frames and is repetitive.
-Lastly, the character expressions, they don't change for more than a few times, especially the mother which scares me. I don't demand that they change every moment (that's impossible) just that they move more frequently.

Final Verdict:
It is pretty okay for a fanime. The character designs are indeed charming and so it the idea. We all got to start from some where and this is a pretty decent one/

FotAnimaciones responds:

thanks but i love pixel lines

Beautiful, the animation is nice to look at and the crude lines further portray the tone of the video. I really had no idea that these amazing creatures are abused like that, it is just awful.

This was really bad, almost if it didn't have a point at all, the animation is weak. It looks like it was done in one draft and in Ms Paint. Next time I would do a sketch then outline it with a thick black. The humor was mediocre and just ended up being more awkward than anything. To ease out of the awkwardness it is better to make light-hearted jokes. Hope you improve and take what I said into consideration, Good Luck =)

willcamick responds:

Thank you for you'r review. The point was to be awkward. I am an amateur animator so these things take time.

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