Sounds good, unfortunately most people on Newgrounds don't speak French. And I speak very little French. Possibly if there could be subtitles.

Tres bien! J'aime il.

The animation is weak, as well as some of the voice actors as if they don't take it seriously. Anyways, all in all it is really enjoyable, [beyond a guilty pleasure]

It is a fanime and it shows, but not in a bad way. Here is somethings you did well:

-You keep colors and art consistant
-The atmosphere is bouncy and fun
-It feels like you have a passion for this story and that is amazing

Here are the things you could work on:
-The lines, it suffers from what I like to call: Ms Paint syndrome. (Lines that are pixelated and crude)
-The animation is the weakest part since it doesn't have many frames and is repetitive.
-Lastly, the character expressions, they don't change for more than a few times, especially the mother which scares me. I don't demand that they change every moment (that's impossible) just that they move more frequently.

Final Verdict:
It is pretty okay for a fanime. The character designs are indeed charming and so it the idea. We all got to start from some where and this is a pretty decent one/

This art work is really garish, uncanny and underdeveloped. Initially I would’ve given the drawing of the person maybe a 2, but coupled with the loud background and pretentious mumbo jumbo ... it’s a zero. I recommend that you study values, color theory, shape, form and lines. (Also remove that stupid text surrounding the subject... it distracts from the focal point